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Reminokanji Admin
Number of posts : 59 Age : 34 Location : In your sugar sack Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Rin Nogama Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:27 pm | |
| I made this when I broke up with my boyfriend about 3 years ago lol. I was such a dramam queen.
Lifeless
All I do is walk, without emotion or pain, happiness is slain and only depression remains. This feeling of nothing, blank or a cease of purpose, The act of cheering myself up only make me nervous. I was never the one to be the center of attention, Not even alive enough to even get mentioned. I walk in the shadows of conformity, Hiding this feeling comes to me normally. The smile on my face is a withering lie, That feeling that once was there, but now I can only deny. Hiding in the haze of shadows is my new fantasy, But I am only a fan to see what I use to be. My heart has grown cold and my soul has become stone, Nothing but a lifeless shell that wishes to be left alone. | |
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Masterjoe42 Admin
Number of posts : 298 Age : 33 Location : One step ahead of you Registration date : 2008-05-31
Character Sheet Character Name: Raivu Level: 100 Health: (1000000/1000000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:32 pm | |
| Very good job. That's pretty "Inspirational"?? | |
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Reminokanji Admin
Number of posts : 59 Age : 34 Location : In your sugar sack Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Rin Nogama Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:46 pm | |
| It was the exact opposite of inspirational lol | |
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Masterjoe42 Admin
Number of posts : 298 Age : 33 Location : One step ahead of you Registration date : 2008-05-31
Character Sheet Character Name: Raivu Level: 100 Health: (1000000/1000000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:48 pm | |
| >.< I'm trying to find a word for it. It was still good. I caught the feeling easily. | |
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Reminokanji Admin
Number of posts : 59 Age : 34 Location : In your sugar sack Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Rin Nogama Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:52 pm | |
| Yeah I am never the popular person, and when my boyfriend broke up with me, thats how I felt. Everyone feels like their not alive at one point. | |
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Masterjoe42 Admin
Number of posts : 298 Age : 33 Location : One step ahead of you Registration date : 2008-05-31
Character Sheet Character Name: Raivu Level: 100 Health: (1000000/1000000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:54 pm | |
| I feel that way sometimes too But I have you to look forward to every day. As I do everyone else on this site. That alone makes it all worth while. | |
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Reminokanji Admin
Number of posts : 59 Age : 34 Location : In your sugar sack Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Rin Nogama Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:56 pm | |
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Masterjoe42 Admin
Number of posts : 298 Age : 33 Location : One step ahead of you Registration date : 2008-05-31
Character Sheet Character Name: Raivu Level: 100 Health: (1000000/1000000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:07 pm | |
| x3 I'm not really a "Boss". I'm a friend. ^_^ I enjoy this site as much as you all do. I just have more privileges. xD (Well, not to you.) | |
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Reminokanji Admin
Number of posts : 59 Age : 34 Location : In your sugar sack Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Rin Nogama Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:11 pm | |
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Mistery Users
Number of posts : 93 Age : 36 Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Level: 1 Health: (500/500)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:34 pm | |
| That's an awesome poem. I could have really related to that. I've been there done that, and it sucks. blah. Oh and we're not friends we're all one big FAMILY!!! xD | |
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Reminokanji Admin
Number of posts : 59 Age : 34 Location : In your sugar sack Registration date : 2008-06-11
Character Sheet Character Name: Rin Nogama Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:42 pm | |
| YAY one big family and Thanks for the comment | |
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XxXDemonaXxX Moderator
Number of posts : 55 Age : 31 Location : in your room Registration date : 2008-06-02
Character Sheet Character Name: Demona Level: 1 Health: (1000/1000)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:00 am | |
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lollipop_ Users
Number of posts : 92 Location : xD Don't try to be a stalker~ Registration date : 2008-06-16
Character Sheet Character Name: Chibi Yuki Level: 1 Health: (500/500)
| Subject: Re: One of my old poems Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:03 am | |
| That poem is awesome, Remi!! I could never compose such a wonderful poem... >_> But I got kind of emo after readeing... Yay!! We are one big family!! *Hugs all* | |
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